Flashback post: Why I built a peaceful fantasy worldPosted: June 14, 2013 | |
If you haven’t seen it, it’s new to you! This was originally posted on August 10th, 2012.
For those who haven’t read my stories of Aligare, I’ll tell you that they’re very positive. Characters genuinely mean well and try to do right by others. Spoiler: no one turns out to be the scheming villain, ever.
Of course, I caught a lot of flack for this when I was a younger writer seeking feedback. Everyone is too nice, the critiquers said! Nothing happens! Lack of conflict is boring! Why don’t they attack each other?
Well, for starters, story conflict isn’t synonymous with characters arguing or lunging at each other’s throats. It’s easy to forget that when we’re used to fantasy stories full of battles, enemies, or at least petty squabbling between the main characters. But the blocking figure in a story can also be something amorphous like natural forces, or one’s own personality flaws, or bad luck. Just because there can be an evil villain in a story doesn’t mean it’s a strict necessity.
I’m using fantasy to question humanity. Which isn’t a new thing. Plenty of authors tackle big issues with the help of dragons/magic/sword fights/whatever. But I don’t want my characters to fight each other for freedom or rights. That seems like a blindingly obvious parallel to humanity. I’m trying something a bit less direct. I’m using a world where the people live under thatch roofs, but have far outpaced first-world humans in social justice.
When I think of humans as an overall species, I wince and hope that extraterrestrial life doesn’t drop by until we’ve stopped being so stupid. We have a long history of violence, cruelty and bigotry to fellow humans (never mind other living things). Something as minor as skin colour or gender can be a gigantic deal that causes humans to hate, fear, and censor each other. Sure, we’ve done some good things. We’ve built cool gadgets and composed a few masterpieces. And many of us are aware that our society has large-scale problems. But it still seems absurd, to me, that we put so much emphasis on our status as “superior” Earth species when we have so far yet to go.
So I didn’t want to put humans in my Aligare world. Why bother sifting through all the historical baggage and prejudices our species carries? I could just create someone new, some variety of people more open-minded than we are. That sounded like a much more appealing world to immerse my brain in for hundreds of writing hours — and, hey, surely some readers will enjoy immersing their brains in it, too. That’s where the three Aligare species got their start.
The Aligare races aren’t there just to be random animal people. They’re meant to make the reader think. If these dragons, insects and weasels can accept each other and work genuinely together, why can’t humans? We evolved as social creatures living in cooperative tribes, but we’ve somehow come to accept aggression and treachery as a normal — even glamorous — part of life. Why don’t we have peace? Is it even possible for humans to have lasting peace? That’s one possible point I hope my readers will consider.
I met a local lady who read Remedy and liked its positivity. She said she was bracing herself for one of the characters to be the scheming bad guy, and she was pleasantly surprised that that never happened. This is exactly the reaction I hope for. I make the Aligare world a positive place full of nice people because, well, why wouldn’t we want to visit a place like that?
I’m sure you’ve guessed by now that I don’t care for the gritty, dark type of fantasy that’s currently popular. I just don’t think constant suffering is realistic. Constant happiness isn’t realistic, either. But a positive attitude? That can endure anything if we let it.
- The meaning of book titles: how I named the Stories of Aligare (heidicvlach.wordpress.com)
- The structure of Aligare homes (heidicvlach.wordpress.com)
- Special formatting in ebooks (heidicvlach.wordpress.com)